Severn Valley Railway Documentary

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Uploaded by on Apr 22, 2009

This is a documentary I created for my BTEC National Dip[loma in Media Production. Uploaded to let you (the rest of the world) rate and comment.

Let me know how it could have been improved.

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  • My Dad actually volunteers on the Severn Valley Railway as a signalman. But you are right, the narration could have been done better.

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  • I thought it was nice photography but I was very conscious of the gaps in the narratiuon when more could have been said of the places being shown. The background music was a nice touch, Didn't get the reference to an engine "work house" at Kidder. You perhaps could get someone who knows the subject matter to give you information to aid your narration on future works. Thanks for posting and inviting comment.

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