Having demonstrated talent I think you need now to find something to say within the limitations of the medium if you want to progress. It was however a very competent and enjoyable effort - and competence, as anyone familiar with this sight can attest, is not a quality to be dismissed when so much here doesn't even aspire to the mediocre. Nor, to be fair, even attempts to.
A really sweet little film, James with obvious talent. A limitation, however, setting yourself the task of fitting it to the allotted music, making it at times repetitive. But it was very atmospheric, even if the story line was a little predictable. It would have been improved if you had used actors for the voice overs - the lack of believability in the delivery restricted it to the children's video category when the style was much more adult. (more)
The score's amazing, nice film
jazz4 3 years ago
Nice work! I enjoyed the storyline, although it was a tad predictable. Animation was pretty stiff too, but overall a nice job :)
ivanisavich 4 years ago
Having demonstrated talent I think you need now to find something to say within the limitations of the medium if you want to progress. It was however a very competent and enjoyable effort - and competence, as anyone familiar with this sight can attest, is not a quality to be dismissed when so much here doesn't even aspire to the mediocre. Nor, to be fair, even attempts to.
lucclaris 4 years ago
A really sweet little film, James with obvious talent. A limitation, however, setting yourself the task of fitting it to the allotted music, making it at times repetitive. But it was very atmospheric, even if the story line was a little predictable. It would have been improved if you had used actors for the voice overs - the lack of believability in the delivery restricted it to the children's video category when the style was much more adult. (more)
lucclaris 4 years ago
work of art
AlfredoCozzi 4 years ago