Concrete Angel Episode One

***************STORY IS IN THE DESCRIPTION**************
-Concrete Angel-
Episode One: A Friend?

Naomi- *walks through the doors of Johnson Dean High School*
...this school's big. *Bumps into someone*

Girl- You need to watch where your going..
Naomi- Sorry, i-
Girl- Whatever, *walks off*
Naomi-..she's not the welcominq commitee.
*looks at her schedule*English 783. Ms.Deboy
*walks towards the classroom*
Deboy- Oh, you must be Naomi Richard
Naomi- yea, umm, the lady in the front office told me to get you to sign this.
Deboy- you'll have to wait till the end of the class for me to sign a.. *looks at the sheet* class completion sheet. *chuckles*
Naomi- Oh..sorry *thinks: great, become a dumbass on the first day*
Deboy- It's alright, take a seat whereever.
Naomi- *sits down in the back table*
???- excuse me
Naomi- huh?
???- your sitting in my seat
Naomi- ugh, sorry, *to herself* Shoot Naomi, such a freakinq retard*
???- *looks at her* New Student?
Naomi- Yea, my name's Naomi Richard
???- Ian Thompson
Naomi- *moves down one seat*sighs deeply*
Deboy- Alright, so yesterday we were talking about our thoughts and feelings towards one another, and what gets us going, whether it be: angry, happy, or er, pissed as you kids call it. *smiles* so talk with your partner for the disscusion.
Ian- I guess your my partner. so we we're talking about our feelings towards other. so, umm, how do you feel towards people.
Naomi- I'm not a people person. Umm, generally, i see them how they are. *scribbles on a piece of paper*
Ian- Not a people person, huh? I guess your friends thought you were pretty uptight whe it came to hanging out right?
Naomi- ...
Ian- Oh, i didn't hit a raw nerve there, did i?
Naomi- N-No, its okay. Umm, i didn't have much friends where i was.
Ian- Oh so you must be a famil type of person?
Naomi- *scoffs* f_ck family
Ian- I take it your not close with your family.
Naomi- No. *looks at him*
Ian- You can tell me
Naomi- *laughs* If i tell you , i'd have to kill you
*Bell Rings*
Naomi- Time for my next class
Ian- w-wait, what class do you have next?
Naomi- Biology, Art Honors, and Lunch..
Ian- Oh *thinks: she doesn't have my class order*
Naomi-...but not in that order *smiles and leaves*
--School Day Is Over--
*Naomi Walking Home*
Ian- *spots her* Naomi!
Naomi- *turns around* oh, hi Ian.
Ian- *catches up* Hey, I didn't know you lived around her. I can walk you home if you want,..
Naomi- N-No, its okay. Its only around the block
Ian- Oh okay, sure. I gotta go to my friends Taylor's house anyways
Naomi- *thinks: taylor?* Oh cool, well bye. seeya at school tomorrow.
Ian- OK, bye. *walk away*
Naomi- *walks around the block**enters a house with one broken window and empty beer bottles on the lawn* ...
???- Where the hell have you been?! *drunk*
Naomi- School, Mom.
Mom- Hmpf. Get the hell upstairs and start on your chores
Naomi- I already did them,
Mom- Don't talk back to me, go find somethin' else to do. *mumbles* dumbass
Naomi- *mumbles* at least i made it to highschool
Mom- What'd you say?...

to be continued
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[michiemonster]

10+ but i uploaded the second one for the wait

[karateabby]

how many comments do u need?

[michiemonster]

tell others about it. I have the Second Episode and its really good. but i need comments!

[karateabby]

awsome!

:)