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"He was eating my life" :)
love it
4 years ago 3
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Great shooting/editing/location, and good sound.
Since this is a parable, I would recommend that instead of telling us that we all have these roommates (I kinda zoned out at that point: it was preaching), I'd almost go more personal: "Is anything eating your Life Cereal?" And leave it at that. It would stay quirky that way.
I liked the "bookend" at the end.
Good job. -Luke
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I like it! :) It's great
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profound!
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this is really really awesome!!! I love it!
~Katrina~
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i love the point to this video and just to let you know i know linsay barkley she's my history teacher she says she knows you!
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Your film totally shoulda won. It was WAY better than the Sock film, which in my opinion wasn't very enjoyable. How did you come up with such an awesome story? Your film kicks elbow!
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Great one!!! *****Nice cinematography
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I don't comment on videos...but I have to comment on this. I think you put together a mini-masterpiece here. I don't mean to be overdramatic, but this really is excellent work. If I could have voted...I would have picked this to win easily...even over mine...which I am a bit partial towards.
kyrandavid 4 years ago
a mini masterpiece...wow. thanks! can we put your quote on the back of the dvd cover? :)
thanks for everyone's comments and input. we are very encouraged...
abandonfilms 4 years ago
I liked your intro alot.Your shots were really nice and you had a great location! Was confused by your point though.
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EmotionalPictures 4 years ago
thanks. glad you liked.
at it's core this film is a christian parable, dealing with man's internal struggle with his own nature and the need for salvation. for the main character, the roommate represents the self-destructive part of him that takes away his life (the cereal). it is important to note that in christian art and literature, water often represents renewal and purification.
abandonfilms 4 years ago