Break Up - Monologue
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eep your hair out of your face over all good job
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Wow ur Good!! Maybe a little faster would be better but ur Really good !!! it sounds real and i liked it!! keep it up :D
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Very nice, the only thing is your eyemovement (when you "stare him in the eyes" and then for a split second look in a different direction, then back at "him"). People that lie do that moviement in their eyes, because they are afraid of eyecontact. So by doing that, that slight movement makes your acting pretty fake. I had that issue before but then I practiced in the mirror and then got it. U should try that or else your acting will seem like a lie.
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haha that would be interesting. i'll give it a try :)
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OMG THAT WAS SO SHORT YET SO GOOD!!! IT'S OBVIOUS YOU ARE TALENTED!! THANKS FOR SHARING!
MegaDreamer88 1 year ago
@MegaDreamer88 thank you for watching and thank you for the compliments :) much appreciated!
dialfordisaster 1 year ago
To me, you look like your showing how your "supposed" to be feeling, rather than just trying to be in the moment. How much work did you put into this? Maybe you should find more justification for why your saying the things your saying. I mean, it seems like your heart should be breaking, but you seem rather mundane about it.
KayKay114 1 year ago 4
@KayKay114 fair enough. this was my first monologue performance. i did this many years ago when i was still a little green. but i appreciate your feedback.
dialfordisaster 1 year ago
move on already that was the worst thing ive ever seen just kidding but you shoulda looked at the camera
blastedd4 1 year ago
@blastedd4 uhm, i'm sorry... but first of all its a monologue. it's fake. i was acting.
second of all, you don't always have to look at the camera's for a monologue. in fact, when do you ever see actors in movies looking at the camera when performing their lines? close to never. so please mind your buisness unless you know what you are talking about.
dialfordisaster 1 year ago 2