Seascape with Sharks and Dancers - Don Nigro featuring Lauren McCullough

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Uploaded by on Mar 31, 2010

Monologue from Seascape with Sharks and Dancers written by Don Nigro
Performed by Lauren McCullough
www.LaurenMcCullough.com
Lauren@LaurenMcCullough.com

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  • very realistic and believable! but I feel like this monologue can have a lot more vocal variety and emotional contrast. you stay pretty much on the same bitter, quietly furious level throughout the entire thing. it also looks sort of like you're reading it off, because your character never has to stop to think what she's trying to say, and she never really gets flustered of upset. good job, but see if you can bring some more excitement, levels, and contrast to the emotions. :)

  • @emeraldEvi Thank you for taking time to watch the monologue & for the honest critique.

    This was recorded after presenting this piece at a showcase in which I was directed to not pause as much for thinking, but I agree with the sentiment that the lack of "time to think" and levels of emotion could be worked on.

    Thank you again!

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  • I loved it though :D

  • I think you deliver it too quickly, be a little more thoughtful with it. Really "remember" those animals.

  • @lm08074n Interesting that they told you that.  good luck with your acting!

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