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Uploaded by on Jul 14, 2007

a calm observer of the final days.

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  • cinemathequefilms is absolutely correct. there is an obvious sincerity which is uncommon even among more experienced poets. it would serve you to present in a "live" setting; the physical experience is productive. It might help you to expand #8; definitely worth the effort. You do, on occasion, seem to lose track of the voice that brought forth the words. try to find some of Morrison's readings of Doors lyrics and get a feel for what alternatives await.

  • OK. It gives me hope. That there are people willing to be this viscerally expressive. That it can still come from within. It's not a question of good or bad. It's more an issue of holding on to it tightly and not allowing it to be taken away. By vampires and they're out there. Because it has value. It is worth working on and probing more. Most people can't go there. They would be far too frozen.

  • The one with the girl at the gravestone ... you can see it.

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