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CAROLINE's Point of View:
"My mom died, I didn't." I said finally. "But you treated me like I did. Like I was dead." [AN:I changed up the last line of chapter 11 here because it didn't really make sense to a lot of people. I'm really sorry about that guys!]
Joe..? Joe... you there? He was just standing there. He wasn't saying anything, but he was still staring at me I could feel it. Finally I look up. And I was right. So now we're just standing here. It seems like it's been forever. And I once again feel weird. Just like the party last night right before we... before we... kissed. But this time as I look into his eyes, things start to make sense. My thoughts are falling into place; where they belong. And I feel like I've finally gotten control of my life again.
As soon as the feeling came it left. Just as soon as I felt like we were getting somewhere, Joe decides to drop me back on my ass. Right where I started. Why? WhyWhyWhyWhyWhy?! I'll tell you why! Because he's walking away. Because Joe's just leaving! I watch him, with his head down and slumped over, as he strolls away. And I'm still here. Standing like an idiot! And what do I do? I wait. I'm waiting for Joe to come back. I'm hoping and wishing he comes back.
Five minutes have passed and the only thing that has come back is the same feeling of emptiness and confusion. But this time I'm angry. The first time he walked out of my life I thought it was all my fault; my own mistakes. But this time I know it's his own fault for walking out of my life again. I shouldn't have given him the chance.
The anger is bubbling through my veins and it's driving me insane. And there's only one cure. Revenge.
I walk to a bus stop by myself, once again. But this time, instead of spending the forty minutes clearing my head, I'll be doing the exact opposite. I've got a lot of planning to do.
JOE's Point of View:
What was I suppose to say to that. That I'm sorry? Because I was. I am. Caroline's got to know that I never meant to hurt her like I did. Back then I was too young to be able to handle the situation properly, so what did I do? I ran. I'm still running. So what can she expect me to say to THAT. I mean, that's something she should be saying to her shrink. Right?
Me, I've never really known the right thing to say. Like that right then, about the shrink, if I said that she'd have slapped me or, worse, never talk to me again. But it's not like she's gonna anyways, because what I did instead was no better then if I were to escort her to a shrink myself. I simply, walked away. I pretty much avoided the whole situation, and her, by just turning my back on Caroline. Right when she seemed to need me most.
At the moment, it seemed like the best thing to do, but now, in the passenger seat of Kevin's car, I finally saw myself for what I really was. A complete and utter fool. How could I have just walked out on her like I did? She's Ma Camarade, and I'm suppose to be hers. Some friend I am.
And now I'm so frustrated with myself that I actually slam both fists into my thighs. I wince from the pain, but I deserved it. I couldn't even be a friend to her, when really all I wanted was to be... I don't even know. Maybe... more? Yeah... more then friends.
"Stop the car Kevin!"
He instantly slams the brakes on his car. Fortunately we were still in the parking lot of Centennial and not a busy street or something. He looked over at me from his driver's seat.
"What is it?" he says. I can hear worry, frustration and well 'older-brother' in his voice.
I jump out of the car, after quickly informing him that I'd be right back. I sprint into the fitness centre and continue running to the spot where I had last left Caroline. By the time I get over to that bench I'm bent over from my breathing, or lack there of. I check my watch. It's been about 10 minutes from when I had walked off on her. How far could she have gone?
***
By the time I get back into Kevin's car, my head was spotted with sweat and the tears in my eyes were threatening to fall. I couldn't help but to feel like a small 10-year-old boy whom had just seen his favourite pair of shorts, all torn up. But this time, the 10-year-old boy, now 6 years older, had instead lost his Camarade. I feel as though I've lost Caroline.
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