Great stuff, Steve!. So many lines made me laugh like frying the queen in chip fat oil and the bratwurst line. I liked the abstract visuals too - literal visuals would have been a bit too much. You let the words do the talking and the visuals play truant at times which is a pleasant surprise.
Great stuff, Steve!. So many lines made me laugh like frying the queen in chip fat oil and the bratwurst line. I liked the abstract visuals too - literal visuals would have been a bit too much. You let the words do the talking and the visuals play truant at times which is a pleasant surprise.
sonnetqueen3 1 year ago
I lost my appetite!
simondsouza 3 years ago