that looks unstable (#2)

original song by e.f. beckley
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that looks unstable but so are the presses.
forgetting some factors is part of the process.
the time you were faithful has come to be famous.
a rock that has tumbled is hard to express in a word.
your good friends always have said
your fate is down in the lake.
still, you have always enjoyed
reaching the tipping point.
that looks to be just another cold lesson.
what once was unnoticed ain't suddenly winsome.
what lies near the edge is likely to topple.
to stand on two legs is just to work out like i said.
your good friends always have said
your fate is down in the lake.
still, you have always enjoyed
reaching the tipping point.
that looks unstable,
i was told.

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• unstable
• live music

[Maximum366]

cool tune, like it..you have a good unique voice, man

Herb

[efbeckley]

@Maximum366 hey, Herb, thanks for commenting, i'm glad you liked it!

[fieldsr71]

thumbs up!I good job........How long have you been writing songs ef?I do good if I can write one in a month and you turn them out like a conveyor belt!keep them coming I really have grown to looking forward to the next EF Classic!!!!Hope you have a nice Easter......

[efbeckley]

@fieldsr71 i'm really glad someone likes this song. i started writing when i was about 14 and i'm 32 now, so you can do the math on that. i have a lot of 'old' songs that i post, but i also post 'new' songs. i wrote 'eyes on you' in october 2005.

[carrolly2k]

✭✭✭✭✭!

[efbeckley]

@carrolly2k thanks for the rating!

[Roselyne18]

Hello my friend, thank you for sharing your music!

Happy Easter!

All the best

Rosy

[efbeckley]

@RemoSC49 i marked it as private a long time ago because it wasn't very well received.

[efbeckley]

@downhill240 i guess a lot of people don't get it, that's ok. i really like this song. i think the lyrics are great and i really like the way it sounds 'unstable'. conventional songs can be so boring.

[downhill240]

You got me scratchin' my head with this one! LOL