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Uploaded by on Nov 5, 2010

Narcissism eats away at an individual throughout his life and is given a second chance to reconsider his existence by another force of nature.

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  • Alot of improvements man. You got the down good. I do agree that the audio has alot of excess noise. The music fit well with everything.

    Cinematography wise I thought it could be more of an improvement, you did the best you could that was great. It would be nice to have more close-up to a character so we can be more drawn into the story. Alot of your wide shots makes me feel like im detached from the story.

    More articulation into the dialogue, acting needs improvement. Overall, im impressed!

  • @directorinmovies Thanks man!

  • Overall good improvement. Story and writing were strong moments.

    Your audio has this hum white noise. Get a program that noise reduces which can clear some of that.

    Good opening and music.

    The acting did feel more like reading than sincere dialogue so work more at the acting.

    The editing improved. Not as jumpy. However some cuts were still awkward. Same with the cinematography. Lots of the angles were framed well, some were a little awkward at times like with the girls face being cut off.

  • @dardrex777 Thanks!

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  • good job :)

  • Awesome!  Congrats!

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