You do realize that "To die" means "To orgasim" in old english... right?
You are far too heavy on your R's. You have raw talent. Have fun with it. Know that the song is about death AND sex and you'll be pretty good. Play with dynamics and vabrato and think about what you are singing and you'll be great :)
this needs to be more legato and more accent on the lyrics, it sounds to nasaly, good job but work on the breath, it should be "I sit I sigh I weep I faint*breath* I die..." you sound unsupported after you hold that 5 count. In other words though good job
Sounds great Ryan...your pitching is spot on...thanks for posting..
best regards :-)
rmberry7 7 months ago
Great job Ryan. Hope you kept up with your singing.
chercle 1 year ago
It's not that good
johnslullaby 2 years ago
very good if you could carry the Die note a lil more you got gold.
adayofplague 2 years ago
why does everyone think that he knows better?
I think it´s quite beautiful
fredz8 2 years ago
learn how to spell vibrato
olsone5 3 years ago
yo that's totally gonna help me the whole "to die" thing. i just got this song in voice so THANKS!
MalloryHoffman 3 years ago
You do realize that "To die" means "To orgasim" in old english... right?
You are far too heavy on your R's. You have raw talent. Have fun with it. Know that the song is about death AND sex and you'll be pretty good. Play with dynamics and vabrato and think about what you are singing and you'll be great :)
Stanleh 3 years ago
also put more feeling into it! More Energy!
FueledByKitty 3 years ago
this needs to be more legato and more accent on the lyrics, it sounds to nasaly, good job but work on the breath, it should be "I sit I sigh I weep I faint*breath* I die..." you sound unsupported after you hold that 5 count. In other words though good job
FueledByKitty 3 years ago