Hey everyone thanks again for all the comments. I decided to upload this part early becuase of all the great feedback I've been getting. There is probably only going to be 11 more parts to this series but I haven't decided yet. I'm in the middle of getting my writing my first book and trying to finish it has been a bit hard. Anyway here's the next part and if any of you have a myspace page feel free to tell me if you would want to add me as a friend and I'll send over the link. Just incase any of you would want to keep in touch for when my story comes out to book stores or just to be phantom friends. Enjoy this part everyone and keep the feedback rolling! Thanks! I love you all!
hahahaha, when orson was like: "you'll love my mom" i was like: haha, you have no idea....
thenana011 1 year ago
Yay they're together again! Love this!
VHebert77 1 year ago
honestly... This was exciting at first. Ya know, with the whole boat thing and all. But soon after Christine got pregnant, it turned into a soap opera, not a real story. Your ideas are creative, but maybe you're getting ideas from a TV series? It's just too unoriginal. I'm staying subscribed in hopes that something exciting will happen. Sorry, but that's just how I feel. : /
musicmaniacfreak 2 years ago
i like the part when Orson ask Christine when she saw Erik
!!!=)
154228835 2 years ago
As the boy's name should be an "O-name" I do like your choice of Orson - in my not-English-mother-tongue mind I always here the sound Awsome when I see his name - what a perfect contrast to little Eric
glycodenmark 2 years ago
wow!!!:O
Phantastic=D
awesome!!!:) they are all together!!!:)
154228835 2 years ago
One word...INCREDIBLE, i think this was my favorite chapter of them all. Well, things are certainly heating up between erik and christine. LOL I'm so happy they're back together again. Awesome job, i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! :)
PtoArchAngel93 2 years ago
FANTASTIC!!!! I adore this series. I just love it. It's amazing!!!! Keep up the great work!
ChristineDaaePhan07 2 years ago
Loved it so much can't even tell u
brookeiorio 2 years ago
WOW
AWSOME
you are incredible!
I love this part!
5 stars!
XxWanderingChildxX 2 years ago