Dragon Club part1

Dragon Club part1

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dragon club is the manga i am making about a boy named akito shen, and hes dream to be the best fighter in the would, this is only 50% of chapter 1.

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[qhappyjoy96q]

Hm... I'm not the one to talk, but I think that you should start out with an outline first, you know, with circles... It always helps adn improves the proportion size between the head and body... And like I said before, don't hesitate to erase something and re-do it... Pretty good, but some scenes need improving, like the profile scene between Akito and Eyebrow-guy at 2:26...

[andrew6318]

thanks you help me to make up my mind, in the end i dont think i will go with this one its not as good as i hoped.

[qhappyjoy96q]

Oh, no, that's not the idea that I wanted to imply... I really admire you for being able to draw manga (in other words, being able to draw the same Akito in some many scenes)...

[andrew6318]

no it's not like that I am going to remake the 1st chapter again and using the computer I will add the speech bubbles and word allowing me to draw a better picture and also I've have been improving the proportion size.

it looks much better so far and to tell the true i don't like how this one come out.

[andrew6318]

The legs in the fight scene aren't fluent.

[andrew6318]

you meen make the pictures better

[Sillyantman]

i see its good but comment ma stuff dude comz on i take time on ma vids

[TheTreeAMV]

Pretty good. Congrats.

[Cinzia7]

I just like the way it looks =]

[andrew6318]

thanks cinzia, do you think any of it needs improving?