Write lyrics for my Hard Rock/Metal Song. I need your HELP

Hello all and thanks for stopping by. I wrote this song in a few hours and NEED collaboration. I really SUCK at writing lyrics. So here you go if your a person of the written word. Any help would be greatly appreciated. I can send this in MP3 or any other from if you know recording software.
Thanks.

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• song
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• hard
• rock
• metal
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[calzo101]

did you get the lyrics then?

[hrdrocker38]

@calzo101 no i didn't



[hrdrocker38]

To everyone thanks so much for your hard work and dedication towards this project..Kepp 'em coming...I will post some new metal real soon.....



[eternalanimosity]

awsome song well groovy awsome

[hrdrocker38]

@eternalanimosity groovy awesome..I guess no one can ask for a better comment..Thanks!

[MegaTallicaCovers]

That main riff is pretty nasty, dude!

[shredurguitar]

Kinda reminded me of dream theater

[geff61457]

Ok, look you have a great hook with the song

But you need faster (bpm) not by much though, u need a raw sound , you have to much flanger and chorus on the guitar

And in the recording the drums kinda drounded out the rythem guitar...and turn off all delay u will have a fucking kickass song then but keep up the work it's alright

[noahqweboy]

This is crappy but here- [ 0:48 RAAAAAHHHH!...] the end. its way to hard

[xba222]

I can make lyrics if you want to.

[maiden06660]

Just leave it as an instrumental song?

[MrAnimax301]

can i get this download? i think the tune and tempo will be perfect to go with the lyrics i have here

[MrAwsomeZombie]

What recording do you use?

[boywomack]

you should have a rythem guitar playing that riff on a lower octave or is there i cant tell if thats guitar or bass

[LYNNRRADER]

I bet I am older than you, but I have been to so many concerts in my life and music has been the biggest part of my life! I can usually tell what song it is just on the first or second note! I will have to listen to this a bunch of times and if I come up with anything you bet I will let you know and do not give up! Never give up! It sounds great! keep pluggin away.