Oh yes, this is much better. Makes way more sense, the characters are more understandable, and it doesn't have the negative vibe of the shorter version.
Still great shots. A few moments that could have been shortened a bit in editing. Also, keep working on acting, there's room for improvement.
But I love the subtly of the message: You show and don't tell. Good! -Luke
Nice one jamie. oh and by the way its jared from math class
jarzee12 3 years ago
Good Job that was funny
JMan1913COD4 3 years ago
LMFAO I noticed that too.
it's alright though. I'm assuming you're sarah!
I didn't know you acted! you did pretty well
alex, you're great at filming.
I can't word what I'm trying to say correctly right now and if I tried I'd sound like an idiot, so I won't bother.
but you did a great job filming.
great job guys. (:
btw this is molly from french/english class
my favorite part was when the little kid (alex's brother I assume?) yelled out "you're dumb!". it was cute haha
Mijanova 3 years ago
great job, i like this one better.
MeatloafMedia 3 years ago 2
ok i'm i the only one that saw me flip the page on the computer!..maybe i shouldn't say anything
alienmewe 3 years ago 2
Oh yes, this is much better. Makes way more sense, the characters are more understandable, and it doesn't have the negative vibe of the shorter version.
Still great shots. A few moments that could have been shortened a bit in editing. Also, keep working on acting, there's room for improvement.
But I love the subtly of the message: You show and don't tell. Good! -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago 2