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FOOLISH LOVE,
Rewrite, June 2011
Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
You make me feel as if,
I had drunk a gallon of Jack Daniels --
That I am powerless and my life unmanageable.
Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
I fear that Grace might not restore my sanity.
I stay up nights and pine away;
Allow my will to run to self riot.
Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
Where did I go wrong?
How was I not able to see that your allure,
Your devilish witchery, would ruin whatever
The chance I once had had
To check my faults of character.
Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
My age, my length of years,
Was I too slow to figure the sum,
Had wisdom failed me, and rendered me prey
A hundred times to the same old line?
You have broken my heart,
Enfeebled my muscles,
And many bones in my body ache.
You have cut my life to the quick.
The pain you cause, I know, I know!
Oh love, oh love, hope now gone,
For me nothing more, there is nothing more,
But day after day of misery.
Thank you, again, and over again, for your support in watching and then commenting on my uploads. They are very much appreciated. Yours, Stanley
StanleyPacion 6 months ago
I believe you.
ricksamuell 7 months ago
@ricksamuell Thank you for your watching and then commenting on my presentation. It is much appreciated.
StanleyPacion 6 months ago
Very cool... faved and all that... and shared on my facebook.... ;P
DavidRandallCurtis 7 months ago
@DavidRandallCurtis As you see, I now know how to reply properly. You are such a great guy. Watch it, you might become an institution. I did work some on the poem. I can not tell you how much I appreciate your positive comments and your efforts to promote my poetry. Yours, Stanley
StanleyPacion 7 months ago