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FOOLISH LOVE, Rewrite, June 11, 2011

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FOOLISH LOVE,
Rewrite, June 2011




Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
You make me feel as if,
I had drunk a gallon of Jack Daniels --
That I am powerless and my life unmanageable.

Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
I fear that Grace might not restore my sanity.
I stay up nights and pine away;
Allow my will to run to self riot.

Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
Where did I go wrong?
How was I not able to see that your allure,
Your devilish witchery, would ruin whatever
The chance I once had had




To check my faults of character.

Oh love, oh love, oh foolish love,
My age, my length of years,
Was I too slow to figure the sum,
Had wisdom failed me, and rendered me prey
A hundred times to the same old line?

You have broken my heart,
Enfeebled my muscles,
And many bones in my body ache.
You have cut my life to the quick.

The pain you cause, I know, I know!

Oh love, oh love, hope now gone,
For me nothing more, there is nothing more,
But day after day of misery.

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  • Thank you, again, and over again, for your support in watching and then commenting on my uploads. They are very much appreciated. Yours, Stanley

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  • @ricksamuell Thank you for your watching and then commenting on my presentation. It is much appreciated.

  • Very cool...  faved and all that... and shared on my facebook.... ;P

  • @DavidRandallCurtis As you see, I now know how to reply properly. You are such a great guy. Watch it, you might become an institution. I did work some on the poem. I can not tell you how much I appreciate your positive comments and your efforts to promote my poetry. Yours, Stanley

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  • HEY FRIEND HELLO STANLEY THIS IS A GOOD POEM NICE WORK MAN I HAVE FELT SOME OF THEM WORDS MANY YEAR BACK MAYBE ONE MUST FEEL PAIN IN HIS ARE HER LIFE TO UNSTAND REAL LOVE BLESS ALL YOU DO IN YOUR LIFE ITS BEEN ALONG TIME LAST TIME I WAS HERE THANK YOU FOR ALL THINGS YOU SHARE WITH YOUTUBE AN FRIENDS JIMMY

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