Hey guys! I know I was suppose to post this like... last week but I never did! I am soooo sorry!
I was so upset because I had so many Ideas! But please understand that I am getting these out as fast as I can
but I was wondering are my series any good? Like is it worth waiting to see the next episode of my series? Please please answer me! But once again I am TERRIBLY sorry for the wait! I hope you all understand, and I could have gotten this far without you! So thank you all sooo much it means MORE than the world to me! :)
Now to the story
With the Jonas at their house. (JBM Jonas Brothers Mom JBD Jonas Brothers Dad) JBM (walks into Nicks room and shakes him) Nicholas get up you have to go to school today!
Nick (groans) no I dont
JBM Nicholas Up Now!
Nick (sighs) Is Joe and Kevin up yet?
JBM No not yet
Nick (groans) then why do I have to get up?!?!
JBM because I said so! You have to be at school early
I arranged a meeting for you and some teachers.
Nick (gets up fast) WHAT?!?!
JBM (smiles) Nicholas your father and I have noticed how your grades are slipping and if you want a future you have to work for it.
Nick I HAVE A LONG TIME TO THINK ABOUT MY FUTURE!!
JBM But sweetie
(puts her hand on his shoulder)
Nick (pushes her off) No mom! Dont sweetie Me! I have 2 years to think about that! Dont pressure me because your precious and might I add LOVED son Kevin is beginning to build his life but mom COME ON HE IS 21 FOR GOD SAKE!!
JBD (comes into the room) What are we yelling about at 6 in the morning?
Nick (sighs loudly) NOTHING DAD! Okay?!?! I am going to go to school get all As come home do homework and go to bed doesnt that sound FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC!?!?
JBD HEY! DONT YOU USE THAT TONE WITH ME OR YOUR MOTHER YOUNG MAN!
JBM No swearing in my household!
Nick Sorry! Now leave I have to get ready!
JBM+D (leave)
Nick (shuts his door and slides down it crying)
With Selena.
SM Selena sweetie time to get up.
Selena (groans) nu-uh!
SM ya-huh now come on and get up or you will be late.
Selena (sighs) FINE! (laughs)
Zac walk down the hallway)
Selena ZAC?!?!
Zac (walks to her room) Yeah? (scratches his head)
Selena - Did you leave me any hot water?
Zac (smiles innocently) Yes
Selena (gasps) YOU DIDNT?!!?
Zac (runs to his room)
Selena (get up) YOUR GOING TO DIE!! (runs after him and pounds on his door) Zac!!! Open up!!
Zac (turns on the blow drier) WHAT?!?! I CANT HEAR YOU! (laughs)
Selena (shakes her head) Mom? Why did you ever teach him how to use the blow drier?
SM Sorry! He needed a change! (laughs) So what will it be for breakfast?
So I am going to skip through breakfast and get to the point when they are all headed for school.
Selena bye mom! (kisses her cheek)
Zac bye mommy! (hugs her then kisses her cheek)
They leave for the bus.
With Nick
Nick (doesnt say bye and just leaves slamming the door shut and runs to the bus stop)
When they get on the bus. (Zac and Selena are sitting together talking and Nick gets on and sits beside Selena)
Selena (laughs) Yeah I know! And I was like Oh yeah I sooo went there And she was all like Oh no you didnt! It was sooo funny!
Zac Im sure.
Selena (shakes her head) you had to be there! (throws her arm up to fix her hair but hits someone in the face) Oh I am so sorry!
Nick (doesnt look at her) You should be!
Selena (scoffs) Well I am!
Nick Shut the Fuck up!
Selena (about to say something)
Zac HEY! What did you just say to my sister Punk?
Selena Zac! Calm down! (turns to look at Nick)
Nick (looks at her up and down and thinks wow) (surprise surprise he stops at her
chest)
Selena (looks at him funny) Excuse me my face is up here.
Zac (sees him looking at her chest) HEY PUNK! (stands up in the Bus) What the hell do you think your doing?!?!
Uh Oh! What is Zac going to do? What is Selena going to do? Why is Nick the way he is? Why was he crying? Find out in the next episode! :)
So what did you think?
A GREAT! Keep it coming.
B It will get better but this was really good.
C Could be better.
D SHITY!!! NEVER WRITE AGAIN!
So tell me what you think! :)
Thanks for watching! :)
yeah im gonna go with d
puppetnj 2 years ago
@puppetnj Thank you for being honest :)
I don't know if you were doing it to upset me, or because you actually thought that or both or whatever, but thanks. At least it made you feel something! :)
alittlebitlonger88 2 years ago
b or c. no offense or anything... i just think it coulda been better.
soon2beauthor 2 years ago
Thanks for the honesty :)
And there is no sarcasm in what I said, just so you know :)
alittlebitlonger88 2 years ago
Aaaaaaa! I love your series! They are totally worth reading!!! This series is really good already!
Bailey2595 3 years ago
Aw thanks so much!
It means a lot :)
alittlebitlonger88 3 years ago