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great story and plotline..camera work need some more potential. it need more medium shots and establishing shots. instead of close up shots all the time... and it is dark on some shots, but hey. storyline is important in my books, and good acting(actors)...i thought it was a good one. kudos!
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Alex looks a lot like mark wahlberg hey?! Great acting! Good work.
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Hey, good over the shoulder camera shots and good wide shots ...decent acting :)
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poor sound and lighting, some horrible shots, some bad cuts, decent acting from few actors, overall I would said i'm disappointed. Disappointed because I expected something better from a VFS student.
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Dude I just talked to Rebecca on facebook and she is My FAAAVE actress!
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Gaaay!
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the acting had no emotions to it for me..
the plot really had meaning to it
overall it's good
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Very good and original plot, great acting and nice direction. I liked the handheld camera. Only thing I disliked was slightly bad sound at times.
5/5
Great story, solid performances. I have to disagree with everyone else about the tripod. I found the handheld camera gave it a more realistic feel. I felt like I caught a glimpse of real life; I know some of these characters! I found the ending a bit weak though, as if you were trying to hard to wrap everything up in a nice neat package. All in all a great short and I look forward to seeing more from you. I look forward to seeing a lot more from you in the future :)
nanagaga2001 2 years ago 3
17:54 - you can see that Kent - the character who died, was actually born in... 19-th century O.o The flowers just didn't cover the date enough. A funny glitch.
Overall - this picture is kinda good! Well written and acted. Too many closeups I think.
fakeshocker 2 years ago 2