New Tune Final Version - Original Song

*Please Read*

Hello all, thanks for being patient while I developed this song. This is how I want to be, my friend Stu (Stufish4040) suggested using the old chord structure and the new chorus, I think it works well so thanks a lot Stu and thanks to everyone else who commented.

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Lyrics:

I'll buy you flowers
When it's pouring rain
If you do wrong
I'll still see you the same
I'll be your shoulder, to cry on
and expect nothing in return

I'll be your Joker
When you're feeling blue
The morning the evening
and the night time too
I'll carry your bags
I'll lighten your load
I'll be the streetlights
down your road

I'll be your moonlight light
When the darkness falls
I'll walk with you
Wherever you go
I'll light you a smoke
I'll buy you a beer
If you have friends
You've got nothing to fear

Chorus;

I'll be your friend
I'll see you through
This song I wrote
I wrote for you
I'll be your friend

Category:

Music

Tags:

• original
• song
• tom
• waits
• elton
• john
• james
• taylor

[Ottawarocket]

Great final version Duncan! It's a really good song and I love your Piano Playing here *****

Rob

[duckscli]

Thanks again man, great to hear from you ;)

[rhopen]

Hi Duncan, this is a very fine song. I think the contrast between the verses and chorus is right. It all sounds completely satisfying now. Also, I really like that wonderful piano interlude at the end there, it really lets everyone know you are a very good musician. I gotta go eat now but hopefully I can catch up to you later, -Ron

[duckscli]

Thanks a lot Ron, I have a file I want to show you later, I'll be up till 4am ish today, I don't feel like sleeping ; )

[luciahts1]

I loved it !

[Camus286]

good job! the verse music reminds me a bit of "i guess that's why they call it the blues"

[Tilly220]

THis is a great piece of work Duncan . Bravo !

[Zoesstuff]

Soo good! I wihs I could play piano like this! :D

[canajian]

Hey Dunc!

Very nice to see ya postin my friend!

It`s good to hear ya too!

Have a great weekend young man!

*****

[stufish4040]

That piano style is so addictive! It gives your song a great, memorable 'hook', so that it stands out from the crowd. Good job. :)