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Uploaded by on Apr 15, 2008

title sequence for my fyp

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  • Nice. You get five stars, but from one amateur filmmaker to another:

    a) The animation is too fast in relation to the music. Either choose a different theme, or slow the credits down a little.

    b) The title, on the other hand, takes its sweet time to reveal itself. I suggest you make the light sweep go by sooner.

    Just trying to help. Impresive work one way or the other.

  • I agree the pacing is a bit off in some places in relation to the music but this was a university project that was started and finished in two days and needed to be exactly 60 secs. Thats why the title takes ages as a bit of filler at the end.

    The writer of the graphic novel does have a credit but I would be the writer of the short and 4 credits in a minute is already greedy!

    On the next one I'll take my time a bit more and see what you think then. Thanks for the constructive criticism though.

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  • I will be waiting patiently.

    Will your next opening be something else altogether or an improved version of Y? If it's the latter, there's still time to fix the typo in Vaughan's name ;)

    One way or another, I have subscribed to your channel and hope you will keep fighting the good fight.

  • Thats pretty sweet but imo, the cells are really overused especially since almost all Marvel films start with cells[that means you Xmens, Spideys and Incredible Hulk]

  • Oh, and sorry for the double post, but who is the writer? I think that should be mentioned in the opening.

  • What's the music from?

  • Is this for real? Are you making a fan movie?

  • fine work sir

  • So, you're going to do an animated series for Y? That's awesome! I'll be checking back often. Good luck!

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