Tears and Sorrow !!!REMADE!!!

REMADE VERSION!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXcoPkmK7lc

COMMENTS AND RATES ARE WELCOME!!
Just some poems i wrote when i was down in the dumps. I have pick a title for the untitled poem. it is told in tears and sorrow part II I am remaking this video. if you want to see the remade version subscribe or check back every now and then.
The Black world
Terror, Fright
Loneness, Sadness
Coldness, Rudeness
Tears, Sorrow
Your heart heavy with feeling
All the sadness in the world
No has or ever will understand you
Nothing could break the hurt

All alone in the world
All alone and no one to hold you
All alone and no one to listen to your cries
All alone and no one to understand you
All alone in the cold dark world
All alone for the rest of eternity

No were to turn
No were to turn when your miss understood
No were to turn to hide your feelings
No were to turn to let your feelings out
No were to turn to make the pain go away

Can't anyone hear me?
Can anyone hear my cries
Can anyone hear my cry for help
Can any one hear my cry for attention
Can anyone hear my cry for love
Can anyone hear my cry for understanding
Can anyone hear me cry my heart and soul out

No one said a word
There is no one to say how wonderful you are
There is no one to tell you I love you
There is no one to say your smart
There is no one to say the kindest of things
But there is someone ridicule you
But there is someone that only says something to you when you fail
**Now titled**
Tears grow in your eyes. There's no one to hold you, so you hold yourself. You have a little corner in you room. A corner you only go to when you hurt. You hug you favorite pillow and cry, cry, cry. You lie on your bed soaking it with tears. You wonder what life will be like without you. You wonder what the hell your doing here. You wonder what the next day will bring. You wonder what will your family care if your not there. You wonder till you fall into deep sleep.
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[rose1957usa]

Very very good! Do you think you can re- do this again so the words show up better?

Other then that I know I am not alone now because you just did a video of my life too! Both of my parents just died of cancer, I have no children and what little family I have don't care about me......I am so heart broken...............:( I am all alone and I am broken in half and NO ONE cares.

[Littlemoon23]

@rose1957usa i am remaking this so watch out for the remade version =)

[ghostzero24]

hard to read with the white on white

[Littlemoon23]

@ghostzero24 i am redoing this so watch out for the remade one =)

[animelover5076]

they are great but some of them i couldnt read becuase of the back ground :( but im sure they are great.

[Littlemoon23]

@animelover5076 i am currently redoing this video so watch out to the remade version =)

[mgbmthscreamo]

those are so good so depresing i like them i write poems and turn them into songs

[ryansgurl0922]

those are really good

[armykiller96]

not bad

[TrueKingGold]

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[JesusDidnotTapout]

You are very talented....all from the heart that's what makes you stand out.

[Littlemoon23]

@keda2222 umm i expect dinner and a movie first

[keda2222]

I love you ... will you marry me.