Original Song - "Behind A Promise"

Please take it easy on me because this is the first song I've ever written with music with it and I'm only a beginner with the guitar. So I know that the playing isn't that good. I got that guitar in December..... That doesn't mean I don't accept Constructive Criticism :) Comment away

RIP Katie's mom, I never knew her, but I can only imagine how hard that is to go through :(

lyrics :)

You never really know, where you're going...till you get there
There's a road, that you follow...but it's foggy
And the pain, that you suffer...in the crossroads
Goes away, The journey's not much longer

In time you'll see, you and me, there's a road for each of us and soon we'll get there
If you stop now, and slow down, all the work you ever did won't make a difference
There's a whole other world behind a promise

I can hear you calling out, "hello someone...please help me"
When you shout, people gather...with their words they
Slow you down, hurt your feelings... make it longer
Even now, you feel wasted...more than ever

In time you'll see, you and me, there's a road for each of us and soon we'll get there
If you stop now, and slow down, all the work you ever did won't make a difference
There's a whole other world behind a promise

Take my hand, I'll lead you there,
Lose your way, I'm always here,
Keep the faith, make it stronger,
Either way, it's not much longer

Take them down.
Make it loud.
Show them how.
Let it out.

In time you'll see, you and me, there's a road for each of us and soon we'll get there
If you stop now, and slow down, all the work you ever did won't make a difference
There's a whole other world behind a promise
There's a whole other world behind a promise
Don't forget to tell the world you made a promise

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Music

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• Katie
• Behind
• promise
• original
• song
• acoustic
• Alicia
• Clapper

[baseballrules200]

amazing song, and you have a beautiful voice:)

[ESPSROCK]

Really nice song :)

[Aparition42]

First song? Wish my first songs were near that good. I really like the melody and the lyrics are really moving. I particularly liked the "all the work you ever did won't make a difference" line.  I look forward to hearing more originals from you.