A Jemi Twilight Episode 1
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Edward we're not monsters, we're sparkly vampires.
Edward. *looks at her weirdly*
LO BEST LINE EVER KEEP ON REWINDING IT TO THAT PART:)
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"we're not monsters we're sparkly vampires!" LOL
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no offence but the music gets on my nerves
but its good though like u no the music
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no need to fear baby sitter is here... haha aww hes so cute P:
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he/she is trying to tell you that,you writed joe,nick jonas selena gomez(..) in the cast but they're like nowhere in the episode..
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I think she's bella's girl :) not sure
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We're sparkly vampires..lolz wow.
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Who s Renesmee?
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I think that this story is kinda boring no offense but don't tak it as a wayf or you to stop writing these you can keep writing but write a little more better. Srry.
starsandhearts98 2 years ago
Haha. I agree. It's pretty boring. I've improved a bit and I was going to rewrite it but school has been a big pain. Thanks for your honest opinion. :]
TheCampRockSeries 2 years ago
i picerd renesmee so cute and small
Renesmee10155 3 years ago
Me too but if you want to know why renesmee is a teenager just read my reply to xxDramaQueenNxx.She said the same thing that you did.
TheCampRockSeries 3 years ago
how about all the other characters like selena
vanna198463 3 years ago
I don't understand what you're trying to say.
TheCampRockSeries 3 years ago