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Winter Wither by Daniel D. Johansen - Composition

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Uploaded by on Apr 30, 2009

Please rate the composition, not the "video". Thanks.

This is my first serious composition, written down in Sibelius 5 (OS X). Any feedback is highly appreciated. Feel free to comment and give me your opinion about the song! Unconstructive and negative comments might be deleted. Keep it clean, thanks!


Instruments from top:

Vocal (w/o lyrics)
Synth (intro/outro)
Acoustic Guitar
Electric Guitar
Electric Bass
Drums

Copyright 2008

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  • I really love the drive in this -- I'm hearing it without all the midi and with a real ensemble, and this is pretty good. I think the vocals don't really come out like they should in this rendition. I also think variation and dynamics/articulations would help this playback, although this would be done naturally if performed live.

    Thanks for sharing! This is really enjoyable work ^_^ Liked!

  • @ZachEatonMusic Thanks a lot! This is my first composition ever, so it's not as refined as it could be, but I like it myself so I'm definitely going to do something more with it. I agree on the vocals part, I won't do anyhting more in Sibelius with that, but it will definitely turn out very different when it's recorded. Thanks for the great feedback!

  • Knall!!!!! Trenge du vokal på an??

  • @halludo Takk! Ja, eg trenge vel egentlig det! Tekst trenge eg og... (: Lenge siden eg har sett på denna, kanskje eg ska forbedra an litt! ^___^

  • I was speechless when I listened to this. This is truely amazing and your compositions need to be heard by more people, thank you so much for uploading this it has made my day! I am a 15 year old composer and have been using sibelius to compose since the age of 12 and I loved this one so much! I did my own winter composition (found on my channel) called 'Winter Is Here' which I wrote when I was 13. Not nearly as good as yours I have to admit! keep reaching for your dream because I believe in you

  • @EmRalph10 Thanks! That means a lot! :D You are very talented yourself. Best of luck! (: (Sorry for late response, I thought I had responded to this before...)

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  • Er ikke så veldig vanlig, men akkuratt i det partiet følte jeg at det ble litt kjedelig med 12/16 (6/8) hele veien. Når jeg ser tilbake på det nå kunne jeg fått til bedre flyt i 11/16-taktene, men det får gå. Kult at du likte det. :-)

  • 11/16 takt, er det vanlig i metal? 12/16 er min favoritt forøvrig, veldig hendig for trommer.

    Jeg fikk noen ideer her og kan studere trommene dine, takk.

  • Jepp, det va ein skoleoppgava, og me fekk noen juledikt me måtte skriva te, haha. Så va denna den så passa best. xD Takk, takk. ^^

  • Den gamles jul , lol.

    Ikke dårlig :3

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