Winter Wither by Daniel D. Johansen - Composition
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Er ikke så veldig vanlig, men akkuratt i det partiet følte jeg at det ble litt kjedelig med 12/16 (6/8) hele veien. Når jeg ser tilbake på det nå kunne jeg fått til bedre flyt i 11/16-taktene, men det får gå. Kult at du likte det. :-)
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11/16 takt, er det vanlig i metal? 12/16 er min favoritt forøvrig, veldig hendig for trommer.
Jeg fikk noen ideer her og kan studere trommene dine, takk.
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Jepp, det va ein skoleoppgava, og me fekk noen juledikt me måtte skriva te, haha. Så va denna den så passa best. xD Takk, takk. ^^
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Den gamles jul , lol.
Ikke dårlig :3
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I really love the drive in this -- I'm hearing it without all the midi and with a real ensemble, and this is pretty good. I think the vocals don't really come out like they should in this rendition. I also think variation and dynamics/articulations would help this playback, although this would be done naturally if performed live.
Thanks for sharing! This is really enjoyable work ^_^ Liked!
ZachEatonMusic 7 months ago
@ZachEatonMusic Thanks a lot! This is my first composition ever, so it's not as refined as it could be, but I like it myself so I'm definitely going to do something more with it. I agree on the vocals part, I won't do anyhting more in Sibelius with that, but it will definitely turn out very different when it's recorded. Thanks for the great feedback!
BlisteringDDj 7 months ago
Knall!!!!! Trenge du vokal på an??
halludo 1 year ago
@halludo Takk! Ja, eg trenge vel egentlig det! Tekst trenge eg og... (: Lenge siden eg har sett på denna, kanskje eg ska forbedra an litt! ^___^
BlisteringDDj 1 year ago
I was speechless when I listened to this. This is truely amazing and your compositions need to be heard by more people, thank you so much for uploading this it has made my day! I am a 15 year old composer and have been using sibelius to compose since the age of 12 and I loved this one so much! I did my own winter composition (found on my channel) called 'Winter Is Here' which I wrote when I was 13. Not nearly as good as yours I have to admit! keep reaching for your dream because I believe in you
EmRalph10 1 year ago
@EmRalph10 Thanks! That means a lot! :D You are very talented yourself. Best of luck! (: (Sorry for late response, I thought I had responded to this before...)
BlisteringDDj 7 months ago