Like Rain Longs to Fall (Original)

Will be editing and uploading another re-do of this, but here is my new song. Accompanied by keyboard and drums (from keyboard)

Your Smile Gathers Dust
as the dawn greets the sky
I sit by myself
Praying for you to be mine
Oh I long for you
Like rain longs to
Fall through the trees
Let your clouds hover over me

(piano chorus)

Somewhere in time
There's a perfect rhapsody
Where we can sing together
In misplaced harmony
Oh I need your light
Like a broken firefly
Lost in the chilly breeze
Let your warm hands welcome me

(piano chorus...might add vocals)

(Bridge-ish)

Though I'm a flawed vase,
My layers are fragile
So handle with care
and hold our love still

(piano chorus and might add final verse)
(outro)

Category:

Music

Tags:

• like
• rain
• longs
• to
• fall
• msmadhatter
• maranda
• piano
• original
• drums
• singing
• upbeat
• happy
• chords
• keyboard

[waltzinmatilda63]

This was beautiful! Keep on singing girl, you're an inspiration!

[msmadhatter]

thank you!

[duckay]

Nice!