Rachael's Proposed Wedding Song Version 2

I wrote this song for my little sister Rachael who's getting married in December. This the second version of the song. I still haven't decide which I like better. Let me know what you think. Here's the lyrics:

Rachael's Wedding Song

It was God's design from the beginning of time
A man leaves his father and mother and embraces his wife
And the two become of one flesh until they die
A symbol of unity between Church and Christ

Chorus:
And the man says I take you to be my wedded wife
It's with deepest joy you come into my life
And together we will be one
as Christ is one with us

She serves her husband as to the Lord
And he leads his wife as Christ leads the Church
They give up themselves to one another
As Christ showed his love when he sacrificed himself

Chorus:
And the woman says I take you to be my wedded husband
It's with deepest joy you come into my life
And together we will be one
as Christ is one with us

Everything he does bring out the best in her
And everything she does makes him love her all the more
Through trials and suffering their love will grow
In this mystery of marriage created long ago

Chorus:
And God says I take you to be My bride
It's with deepest joy that you share my life
And together we will be one
As I designed
from the beginning of time

Category:

Music

Tags:

• wedding
• song
• marriage
• God
• Christian
• Joshua
• Klahn
• Rachael
• Jason
• Jones
• Christ
• Jesus

[bebroots]

Yeah i agree with them this is better than the other one. The first one is had so mush strumming.. im getting married next year and i wanted to ask your permission to use your song...hehehe

i like it because the lyrics are based from the bible.KEEP it up brother!

[jdkforchrist]

You're more than welcome to use this song for your wedding. It's all God's lyrics anyways. But I do ask that you credit me with the song in some fashion (a simple by Joshua Klahn on the lyrics sheet will do).

[092222]

I want you to sing this one at mine!! haha but I love this one better then the first one.

[jdkforchrist]

hehe - Thanks for the compliment. We'll see how things go at my sisters wedding. And who knows, maybe I'll get confident enough to play it at yours? :)

[lilyfoxylady]

Love it especially from the begining of time together we will be one !! When God says I take you to be My bride

It's with deepest joy that you share my life

And together we will be one

As I designed

from the beginning of time

[panjelina]

Love it! Esp the last part about Christ and his people becoming one! Good job!

[pintadog]

That was better than the other one in some ways.