Re: "Our Father" in conlang Lissenian; Avalǽn

Our Father in my conlang: Avalǽn... enjoy!

EDIT: Avalèn has now gone through a rigorous redesign to get rid of many bugs, errors and ambiguities, and to streamline both the vocabulary and grammar. The site (http://avalen.synthasite.com/) is slowly being updated to V5 Avalèn.

Our father, who art in heaven
Ràln Sǽdh, è'ash en vanàn

Hallowed be thy name
È'aval cìràna dærn ecùs

Thy Kingdom come
Lana'dærn àduc-vat

Thy will be done on earth as it is in heaven
Aval àtìrav cræ amodhel vè cræ vanàn

Give us this day our daily bread
Dònac ràln vìadì antòn ràl vìadis

And forgive us our trespasses
Præ dòrshac ìr rùm tìral

As we forgive those who trespass against us
Vè dòrshal bachev tìra'ash ùledh

And lead us not into temptation
Præ nì folac ràl anè sedùcavàr

But deliver us from evil
At cùrac ràl dà lochavàr

Amen.
Amèn.

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[nzelandaesperantisto]

There is now a forum where you can take part in Avalèn lessons (note, now Avalèn, not Avalǽn!) again, a lot of the grammar has changed, so take what is on the website as correct. Also, I'm expecting almost no one to turn up on the site for ages, so forgive me if you're waiting for lessons and nothing happens. I might also put up some pure grammar (rather than lessons) as well...

[nzelandaesperantisto]

The website is: avalen[dot]proboards107[dot]co­m[slash]index[dot]cgi

Sorry, it wouldn't let me put in the normal url...

[Atomic440]

Looks very elegent. You should post a video of you speaking it for correction intonation and pronunciation.

Noticed my Our Father has a word similar "Ùledh" :P Not in meaning though, I don't think. :P

[nzelandaesperantisto]

Thanks, I tried to make a more aesthetically pleasing language. Didn't come out quite as good as I wanted, but pretty good! I might post a video soon, I don't have much time now though...

Ùledh pretty much means "against" in my conlang. Probably not the same it yours! :-)

However I found a LARGE mistake in my grammar, that makes interpreting it very ambiguous! So, I'll probably withdraw all these videos and do them again! Thats pretty annoying, but its gotta be done!

Thanks for the comment!

[JRios270]

I LOVE IT!!!!!

[ZekGhost]

"deres malden vas.. malden alval.. nemayewya gyamlal malden yaji.. sta sakksophaja rephokktyago.. eratajizann alvonizann.. zerimmsiji vas.. ragallzogy vas saphosego... argallsego maldegygo vas... radraba vas emstoral.. rarsawabbjaggy vas omstraji... omada"

thats my pater noster ;) (-ggy is to be read -gy or -ngy... -ji is to be read -ji or -je.. the -s- inside the word is to be read -z-....)

[yvelleyzelle]

When are they coming out?

[yvelleyzelle]

Some of the sounds remind me of Hebrew or Romani.

[Homoclassicus]

Very interesting. The phonetics are very unique, I can't remember now any similar language. And I must remark it also looks very difficult... heheheh