Secret Chapter 17 Part 4/4

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Recap: MUST READ PARTS 1-3 FIRST!! Or it will not make sense.

Chapter 17 Part 4

*Sarahs POV*

(Sarah's Thoughts)
*When Rachel mentioned that Brian kissed her on the cheek, I saw Joe tense up slightly in the front seat, Rachel didnt seem to notice at all. I knew as soon as Brian showed up at Frannies that Joe liked Rachel as more than a friend. I saw jealousy pass over his features when Rachels face lit up and she said Hi when Brian sat down next to her. I hope he just admits it to himself soon, Rachel is falling for Brian and I think he is going to ask her out soon. If Joe wants to be with Rachel he better do something before Brian and her kiss, on the lips or it will be too late. I know she still remembers their kiss, she told me it was amazing. She felt sparks. I think Rachel and Joe are meant to be. But if Brian makes her happy then Ill keep my mouth shut, unless he hurts her in any way. Then I will kick his football playing as-*
Kevin: Sarah were at your house. *Kevin said interrupting my thoughts*
Sarah: Thanks for the ride. *to Rachel while climbing out of the car* Ill call you tomorrow at like 9 am. *sing-songy* Shopping!!!! YAY!
Rachel: Alright, see you tomorrow.

*Normal POV*

*Kevin waits until Sarah is in her house safely before he drives away.*

Kevin: So what are you guys going shopping for?
Rachel: Does their need to be a reason to go shopping?
Nick: True.
Rachel:*laughs* Actually we are going shopping for our Homecoming dresses tomorrow.
Kevin:*pulls into their driveway and shuts off the car* Well then have fun shopping.
Rachel: *everyone gets out of the car* Oh, I will. *smirks* What are you guys doing?
Nick: Im video chatting with Selena.
Joe: Watching Barney.
Rachel: Omg, what time is it on?!?
Joe: 4 pm I think.
Rachel: Okay well then I have to try and finish shopping in 5 hours so I can be home in time. It will be hard but I think I can manage.
Kevin:*laughs and shakes his head* Im hanging out with Kelly tomorrow.
Rachel: Your girlfriend? *Kevin nods* Ooooo, can I meet her, pretty please?
Kevin: Sure.
Rachel: What time?
Kevin: After Barney I guess. *laughs*
Rachel: Sweet! Alright I have to go sleep and rest up for a day of shopping, bye.*she hugs all 3 boys and they go in their separate houses, and go to sleep*

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[An. Okay this chapter is finally over. What did you guys think? I already know what iluvnickjonas210 will say =D. Sarahs thoughts are basically what she thinks. Was it good, bad, random? Scratch the random part, I know it was. Comment please. I need the feedback so I know how to proceed with the story. If you have story ideas message me and Ill consider them. Sorry the chapter was in so many parts, it was 6 pages on Word. Wow thats really long, oh well. Thanks for reading.
P.S. *whispers* cookies. LOL XD
~Rachel aka depplove23]

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[b3llab0mbolinaa]

is th picture of Rachel a pictur of you?

[depplove23]

it just a pic a found on the internet b/c she had blonde hair & blue eyes and was pretty like the character Rachel

i didnt want to put a pic of me up

[depplove23]

Hey Guys!!!

First off, I want to say thank you for reading and for the positive feedback. I hope you continue to like the story

Second, the bad news. I am SUPER BUSY, that's not just an excuse. I have like 2 research papers to write, a huge project, and like 4 tests this week. *I HATE school!!!*

So that means Chapter 18 won't be up until Wednesday night at the very earliest. Sorry!

Love you guys,

Rachel(depplove23)

[naleyOTH4ever]

Sarah knows exactly what she is talking about!! She should point this out to Rachel when she sees Joe get jealous. I still don't know what Brian is up to but i have a feeling he is not gonna be a good guy.

[depplove23]

your comments made me laugh..thanks for commenting on all 4 parts...i liked seeing your thoughts change :)

You'll have to keep reading the story to find out the if Brian is truly nice or if Rachel ends up with joe =D

[iluvnickjonas210]

hehe you mentioned me, XD!

now lets see if what u think im going to say is what im going to say..if that makes sense! lol

SARAH I LOVE YOU! SHE IS SOO RIGHT! JOE LIKES RACHEL, RACHEL LKES JOE, JOE WILL ASK RACHEL OUT, RACHLE WILL NOT KNOW WHO TO PICK BUT WILL PICK JOE!

haha u probably geussed right :]

lol awesomely amazing chapter!

-lindsay

[depplove23]

i thought this chapter would make you happy but mad at the same time

joe 'may' -keyword may like rachel but he is confused

rachel likes brian more and more but deep down she still has a crush on joe

both think the other still wants to be "just friend" *cue off-key singing*

I basically put things you have said to me into Sarahs brain..so you are my inspiration for Sarahs role in the story

yay you...now come up with a couple name and cheer for Rachel & Joe. i command you!! XD

[depplove23]

Thanx

I know I mainly do Rachel's POV and Normal but mostly b/c its easier to write and its less confusing for me

I did Joe's POV so you could see this denial and inner battle and I kind of view Sarah as the voice of reason, kind of like Kevin, and Sarah is like "the Joe & Rachel couple" cheerleader.

...and you probably didnt need to know all that lol

thanks for reading, im glad you like the story

[PeaceLoveHyperJonas]

Absolutely loved it :)

I liked being inside of everyones head, especially Joes.I always wanted to know what goes on up there. hahaha :)

I really do love this series :)