to many still shots, use some technique. Im at the camp right now and people seem to forget that you can take the camera off the tripod to. Use some technique for gods sake!!
im going to this camp to and Im 13!!! : 0 everyone looks so old there. This looks pretty good!!! Want to make film similar to planet of the apes, inception and 2012. Its called forgotten planet.
i made a film too, and as a fellow film maker such as urself i gatta say.........thats dumb, instead of stiting there uploading to youtube, should've ran for help and called the cops. lol and "you seem cool, i'll give you my email address" lol imma use that pick up line for now on ;]
Good Cinematography. More medium shots & less wide shots would've involved me more. Unique shot (5:41) when 2nd chase starts. Sound isn't as good as it needs to be. Story lacked pacing & substance & could've used more work. Flashback was unneccessary. Victim died funny. Cell phone would've worked better than laptop. A 1st escape needed to be shown for believability. Editing made the story go forward, but nothing else. Good job overall considering who made it. Seems like good 1st film. Make more!
i am going to this camp next week, for the first time. This looks great! but there were some scenes that needed improvement. Such as 1:43, you saw people's feet
to many still shots, use some technique. Im at the camp right now and people seem to forget that you can take the camera off the tripod to. Use some technique for gods sake!!
MrTeamimpact 7 months ago
im going to this camp to and Im 13!!! : 0 everyone looks so old there. This looks pretty good!!! Want to make film similar to planet of the apes, inception and 2012. Its called forgotten planet.
MrTeamimpact 10 months ago
was this the academy of digital filmaking or one of the boot camps?
todlovescheese 1 year ago
i made a film too, and as a fellow film maker such as urself i gatta say.........thats dumb, instead of stiting there uploading to youtube, should've ran for help and called the cops. lol and "you seem cool, i'll give you my email address" lol imma use that pick up line for now on ;]
mx3303 1 year ago
Good Cinematography. More medium shots & less wide shots would've involved me more. Unique shot (5:41) when 2nd chase starts. Sound isn't as good as it needs to be. Story lacked pacing & substance & could've used more work. Flashback was unneccessary. Victim died funny. Cell phone would've worked better than laptop. A 1st escape needed to be shown for believability. Editing made the story go forward, but nothing else. Good job overall considering who made it. Seems like good 1st film. Make more!
bleedingsun7 2 years ago
Why did the killer just stop following her after she got to the stairs?
What the hell?
SecretAgentDouble000 2 years ago
i am going to this camp next week, for the first time. This looks great! but there were some scenes that needed improvement. Such as 1:43, you saw people's feet
The boom mic shadow at 2:01
she is wearing the same clothes during the one week earlier part at 2:38
at 2:54 the guy in the blue shirt talked wayyyyy too quietly.
Bwuddaekul 2 years ago
good movie :)
I got a postcard today from this camp.
This summer I'm working at a kids camp, but maybe next summer.
Looks fun :)
reputationforte 2 years ago
wow, great!
131days 2 years ago