"The Next Chapter" ((An Original Song)))

NO FLAMES OR ELSE YOU'LL BE DELETED AND BANNED FROM COMMENTING!!!!

This is a song I wrote. Hope you enjoy, I won't be putting up the lyrics to it, for a big reason. Hope you all like it.

The song is called, "The Next Chapter." Hope you all like it, and again please no flames.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• pop
• joyousorrow
• graduation
• singing
• Paige
• original
• song

[Kayleneciara]

You sound okay Buy what the fuck are you saying?

[joyousorrow]

@Kayleneciara sorry i tend to mumble, its something i'm working on

[littlelols72]

a lil pitchy but it's good!

keep practicing and you'll get better

I like the song :D

[joyousorrow]

@littlelols72 thank you and i'll do the best that i can :)

[PuneyGuney]

if you don't want people to 'flame' then don't upload unless you can take the critizem

[joyousorrow]

@PuneyGuney umm ...i can take Contructive criticism.... not things like "you suck don't ever sing," "you can't sing give up," or "you're voice sucks" etc... if you tell me something like... "you're a lil pitchy," "you're mumbling the words," or "you not breathing enough" etc. that's just fine.

[SoapAndGlory5239]

No problem :)

[joyousorrow]

@SoapAndGlory5239 thanks

[SoapAndGlory5239]

Loving it! Great job xx

[joyousorrow]

@Gonerong10 this is any older video my singing may have gotten better since