"Ordinary Ghosts" Fanfic ~PART 1

Part 1 of "Ordinary Ghosts"

The accidental death of the older son of an affluent family deeply starins the relationship between the bitter mother, the good-natured father, and the guilt ridden younger son. Melinda learns a dark secret that could tear the family apart forever.

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• Ghost
• Whisperer
• Jimel
• Fan
• Fic
• Ordinary
• Ghosts
• Part
• One

[GHOSTWHISPERERrox13]

Looved itt ..

Baaahaa, although Melinda would never take a day off work. :D

[GhostWhispererJimel]

@GHOSTWHISPERERrox13

hehe, good point! didn't catch that. lol

[GhostWhisperer4]

i really really like it, cant wait for the next one!!!!!!

[LaVie92]

That was quite good. Just a point, though; don't switch from present to past tense unless you're changing the time. You started with "she starts to do this, she starts to do that," and then switched to, "she did this, and she said that," and I was really confused.

You've got an excellent storyline going, though!

[TaylorxMiley]

AHHHHH! SOOO GOOOD! Please post sonner???

I'M GONNA GO NUTS WITHOUT KNOWING!!!!! lol :)

That was AMAZING!!!!! :)