People Change And Promises Are Broken- Chpt 6

CHAPTER 6, i wasnt supposed to post this, and i got help form a person...THANKS!


*Courtney STORMED off and ran, ran until she fell...she was hurt...she sat in a yard and just sat their screaming, crying, and cursing....then she settled down wondeirng, what she could do to make Nick feel SOOO BAD, then she had an idea, as she was crying, she could feel someone behind her, she turned around, she screamed...the person shot her in the stomache, and beated her until she was unconcious....*

*With everyone at home*

JOE: My nose...hurts soo bad!
KEVIN: (coming back with a cloth) You deserved it. (threw it at Joe)
JOE: Ow...
NICK: (sat there thinking of what just happened) What just happened?
BF: (walked in, and punched Joe in the face) BITCH!
JOE: OWWWW!!!!!!!!!
BRITT & KEVIN: (laughing)
EVERYONE: (heard a police car, and ambulance go by, everyone went outside, and saw a bunch of people crowded in one little area...they decided to go see what happened, once they saw who it was...they screamed) COURTNEY!?
OFFICER: You know her?
NICK: THATS MY FRIEND.
BF: NICK SHUT UP! SHES MY SISTER!!!.
PHD: (ambulancer dude lol) Sor \ry, no rides, shes seriously bruised, beaten, and sho in he stomache 3 times, we also think shes in a coma...go to the hospitol...(walked away)

*At the Hospitol*

NICK: (crying) Where is she?!?!
JOE: (felt horrible for making Court more mad, it was his idea to spike the drinks anyways...he knew exactly what to do to make everything better) Ill tlak to the doctor.
BF: If it wasnt for you Nick, we wouldnt be here...why did you have to be SOO stupid. God you too Joe, you spiked our drink so you could get into our pants....I know some pretty low and shallow jerks like yall. But, dayum, they havent gone this low. You know, we were stupid to trust yall anyways. Now you can face the consequences....dumbasses.
BRITT: (crying) Shes strong, she'll be fine...
KEVIN: Mhmmm.
DOC: Are yall with Courtney Mills? (A/N: idk)
EVERYONE: (shot up) Yes.
DOC: We have some good news and bad news....
EVERYONE: BAD NEWS.
DOC: The bad news is...Courtney was shot in the stomache 3 times...we rcovered that...uhm...45 stiches...lots of bruises and cuts...uhm...and shes in a coma....the good news is...we caugh the person who did this.
NICK: (broke down crying)
KEVIN: Can we see her?
DOC: Yes, but only 1 at a time...
BF: Alright, ill go first.
JOE: What room?
DOC: 403.
BRITT: Thanks Doc

*Brittani found Courtney, pretty much lifeless, hooked up to the IVs...needles in tubes stuck into her...she wanted to kill Nick and Joe soo badly or doing this to her own sister...*

BF: (got ot the side and prayed/cryed) Lord, i need your help, im stuck with a problem...im in a storm....i cant do this on my own...she shouldnt be punished for someone elses actions...Lod please just find the strength in Courtney to wake up peaceully, and live. Amen. (talking to herself) Courtnye, i know your gonna wake up, i know you are. I love you. (walked out of the room) Britt, youre next..
BRITT: (got up, an found Courtneys room, once she saw her, she couldnt stand it...she couldnt go any farther, so she turned aruond, and went back to everyone else) I-i cant do it...shes so beaten up.
KEVIN: (gulps) I guss im next. (got up, and walked down the hall and into Courts room, he let a tear or 2 fall, then said) Court, im SO sorry, i shouldnt of let this happen to you...i love you. (A/N: Brotherly way) and left)
Joe, youre next....
JOE: (once he got into the room, his heart stopped, then he broke down crying and said) Courtney, im really and truely sorry, babe, i didnt want this to happen, i only wanted to have some fun, i didnt mean it for his to go this far...Courtney, if you can hear me, i just want to say i love you Court. and im gonna make it up to you and your sister....you'll see. (kissed her forehead, and walked out)
NICK: I guess im next...(walked into Courts room, once he saw her, HIS heart dropped, he felt like hell, he knew this was his ault, not Joes,Keivns, no one elses but his, he felt SO stupid hurting the only girl he loved, he knew spikeing her drink was a bad idea...he knew it. He was just to selfish to admit it.He cried, and prayed, and then the doctor came in)
DOC: Well, Nicholas...any movement?
NICK: No.
DOC: I checked the graphs, im doing everytihng i can to keep her alive, but she only has a 20% chance of living...
NICK: (broke down)
DOC: Im realy sorry, its ashamed to ever did it to her, and i wonder why she was screaming and crying and cursing before alll this happened...do you know?
NICK: Yes. (Nick otld the story)
DOC: Nick, shes dying because of you...you realize that.
NICK: Yeah i do...
DOC: (shook his head, and walked out)

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Tags:

• People
• Change
• And
• Promises
• Are
• Broken

[jennilyn66]

wow that doctor was soo harshed...doctors can get fired for that u know...anyways sooo good...i got that empty achey feeling in my chest especially at nick's part...im not gonna demand u to write more but could u pleae??

[jonasponed33]

haha yeah i know...ad thnks and is tht a good thing?

annd its lik 3:00am here, so ill tell u wha if i don havta post anymore today, tomorrow im not doing ANYTHING, i PROMISE ill post 15 chapters tomorrow....deal?

[jennilyn66]

WHAT...15!!! that would be freaking amazing...and ur story was great but doctors r mean...sorry they scare me...anyways i can't wait!

[jonasponed33]

Yes, and if me and my friend can...MORE

lol and yeah i dont like doctors either...freaky...deaky....lol well im glad neiher can i :)

[Tambasco511]

the doc's name is phil lol doctor phil.

[mooooo30]

This is redic!

[kaseyRSM]

i love that im reading this late!

so i can just keep reading and reading and not have to wait =D

its sooo good!

[JonasBrotherLover444]

the doctor is a prick

[JescaLovey]

Omg.

This is so good.

My heart is like.

POUNDING with shock.

You're an AMAZING writer!

[jonasponed33]

HAHAH THANKS SSOO MUCH! : )

[xlovejbx3]

loved it!

hurry with the next one please!

[jonasponed33]

wos...lol

[BaileyJackson11]

cant wait for next chapter

[jbluv4ever95]

omg omg omg omg!!!!!!! next chapter now!!!!lol. im dying 2 find out!!!