Zombie film - AS Film Studies

Film Studies AS Coursework. (I got an A!) 74/ 75 coursework mark.
Written, Directed and Edited: Tabitha Green

ANY FEEDBACK IS GREATLY APPRECIATED
Good or Bad needed for reflective analysis

Written, Directed and Edited: Tabitha Green
Starring: (In order of appearance)
Rebecca Wembri
The Wembri Family
Kate Poynter
Maram Ghiti
The Green Family

Thank you all for helping me!

Songs:
God and Satan - Biffy Clyro
Let's Kill Tonight - Panic! At the Disco
DEAD! - My Chemical Romance
Brainstorm - Arctic Monkeys
No Copyright Infringement Intended

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• AS Film Studies
• Independent
• WJEC
• Coursework
• Tabitha Green
• Zombie
• Grade

[13makio]

i see ... so will there be more or a part 2 to this film ?

[TotallyAwesomeTabby]

@13makio Maybe some time in the future but I have no immediate plans to continue it :)

[13makio]

either they are in fear or panic .. to sell the whole idea of zombies chasin them

need more weapons for sure ... n the actors ... could be work on their scare n panic ... they look too casual waitin at the door ....

need more zombies .. earlier in the film .... i was really stainin to stay till the end

n that are zombies - so good .. but bring in a epic fight scene or someting

[TotallyAwesomeTabby]

@13makio ... and they aren't panicked as they don't know the zombies are approaching and they are not in immediate danger. They are casual at the door to aid the false shock of when the main character thinks she is being attacked. And this isn't a mindless zombie fest, not al zombie films need a bloodbath in every minute of the film and as mentioned before, this is just a section of a bigger concept of the film. The house has evidence of past action.. Thank you again, I appreciate it :)

[13makio]

slow start ... er ... feedback .. lots .. Work on ur makeup .. zombies all too clean ... check out my vidz ... on my channel for zombies ideas n scenes ... interestin music choice ... some shots too dark ... can;t really see wahs goin on ... why did she shut the door on them the 1st time ? ... when she was approachin the door .. was it suppose to be suspenseful ? neeed sound effects ... n the build up ? honestly ... pacin n edit was slow n pretty flat ...

need more reaction of ur actors

[TotallyAwesomeTabby]

@13makio Thank you for the indepth feedback :)

This is just a section of a concept the whole film as this is coursework for my exams. I chose this section so I could build up tension and what not. There was technical difficulties when editing when all the sound from the footage was lost which was a shame and I decided it would be weird with random sound efffects in like fottsteps or door closing ect.

and with the actors, they aren't actors, they are my friends who never acted before. continue

[mariasweby1]

Hiya - I really really think this is fab and works extremely well. However I agree with ruchigotrouble and towtification that around 2.20 it gets pretty confusing, and I wonder if (given it is only 30 seconds) you could even chop it off? The end is also a bit rushed, as it just kind of cuts off - would you want to extend this/do a freeze or fade there?

[mariasweby1]

Hiya - I really really think this is fab and works extremely well. However I agree with ruchigotrouble and towtification that around 2.20 it gets pretty confusing, and I wonder if (given it is only 30 seconds) you could even chop it off? The end is also a bit rushed, as it just kind of cuts off - would you want to extend this/do a freeze or fade there?

[TotallyAwesomeTabby]

@Towtification Thank you! :) and that has become a trend lol

and that was a last minute addition xD

Thanks again :)

[Towtification]

I really liked the make-up effects and stuff, and the filming and editing was great (the shaky-camera used for the zombies was pretty clever, as was the abrupt ending). It got a bit confusing around the 2:20 mark, but other than that, it was awesome.

I especially liked the Zombie Survival Guide cameo. :P