Fallen Petals; one-shot // part one
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i've read this somewhere before...
1 year ago 4
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soo sad :(
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okay. this is funni. i was watching one episode on the Jerry Seinfeld Show and I just have to say this cause it's so funni.
Jerry: so how about your mother?
Lady who's name I forgot: i dont know her. she left us when i when i was six, all seven of us. i hope she's rotting in an alley somewhere.
Jerry: Okaaaaay....
*long awkward moment*
Jerry: .... so.. you like tacos?
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when you say it's written on a real life experience, do you mean your life experience or someone elses? it's just that you seem like a real upbeat, happy person.
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@TorinMarch i mean front office
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in the beginning, it seems sad cause she's waiting in the rain for her parents. what about grandpa who was waiting in the front table?
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wow i'm sorry for you
it felt good to write it down and to get it out of the head
didnt it?
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im sorry if that happenned to you
but I was connected with the story every second
this was soo amazing!
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im so sorry :( but ur a great writer i can relate to wat happenes there if this happened to u im so sorry :(
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Awwwwwww! Thats sad!!! Who was singing the first song? And did Ur Father Go To jail?!?!
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This was really great! But I feel like Ive read this before. nothing against you or anything, I just feel like maybe someone else had written this before.
FallingAtTheSeams 1 year ago 3
@FallingAtTheSeams I posted this a while ago and it got deleted when I was hacked.
iluvjb4ever123 4 months ago