O.Zee's comment is real talk still. The song, the concept, everything about it is crazy! The verses got some powerful meanings behind em. Its just the delivery, needs to come harder and more hype for man 1 and 3. Your lyrics are ON POINT just work on delivery. MIDDLE MAN kills it! The delievery, doubbles everythings on point for you. Your lyrics are HEAVY. You left your MARK and stood out the most! You sound like a pro like you've done this all before!
Eyyo, not bad, just think whoevers on the first and third verse should get more ... presence and more hyped ... needs some better delivery here and there, (kind of sounds like its written to another beat) other than that the basis of the song and the way its collaborated with each of you's pretty sick...
Sick beat... I like.
Gnosistic 2 years ago
O.Zee's comment is real talk still. The song, the concept, everything about it is crazy! The verses got some powerful meanings behind em. Its just the delivery, needs to come harder and more hype for man 1 and 3. Your lyrics are ON POINT just work on delivery. MIDDLE MAN kills it! The delievery, doubbles everythings on point for you. Your lyrics are HEAVY. You left your MARK and stood out the most! You sound like a pro like you've done this all before!
Overall tho yall kill it
G.C
gawtCheeze 2 years ago
Eyyo, not bad, just think whoevers on the first and third verse should get more ... presence and more hyped ... needs some better delivery here and there, (kind of sounds like its written to another beat) other than that the basis of the song and the way its collaborated with each of you's pretty sick...
Just an opinion though
Keep doin you...
- O.Zee
OZeeGrassman 2 years ago