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Holly Lisle and the Case of the Subtle Secret

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Uploaded by on Jun 22, 2009

http://writercrashtest.com Holly Lisle's writing critique uncovers issues with an unreliable narrator vs. an unreliable writer, vague action that wrecks foreshadowing, stage-direction through speech tags, and the writer's nervousness regarding reader comprehension.

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  • :D Amazing

  • Great intro!

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