15 minute competition entry: Story about Billy and Tommy

Made in about 14:54 that was really close. But i finished it on time. And hopefuly, this is my serious and REAL entry, so maybe this time i won't be rejected.

P.S try to find a mistake in the story.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• siemka321
• 15
• minutes
• gmod
• tf2
• team
• fortress
• hl2
• hal-life
• competition
• entry

[SwankyBadgerFilms]

Assuming the music was actually recorded by you, this is fine.

[siemka321]

@SwankyBadgerFilms It was recored by me. If you want me to prove it i can play a song for you.

[gintukas2]

how did billy die then run away? and if he did, who did he run away from? the train? yet billy didnt even know the train would be attacking him ????

[siemka321]

@gintukas2 Thats the point of the story.

[sakiskid]

FART>

[BlackMesa1997]

ART.

[gmoder10]

jettan would be proud!

[IManofWar]

Im sorry,but is it your real voice?

[Bentley441]

R.I.P. Headphone users

[Bentley441]

Haha