Original piano composition

Me playing one of the songs i wrote please comment ,subscribe ,and give me some advice on how to improve it.

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Music

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• piano

[martakocheva]

Could you tell me the name of the original song and the artist? :)

[FitzMusic]

@martakocheva I wrote and composed the song by myself so therefore i am the original artist and i haven't picked a name for this piece yet. Thank you so much for the comment, i'm glad you enjoyed my composition :)

[FrenchToastAwsome]

Dude, that's awesome. Seriously, you're AMAZING! *O*. Do you have any sheet music you can send me? :D

[FitzMusic]

@FrenchToastAwsome Unfortunately I don't have any sheet music for this song, but if you want i could send you the chords?

[flyingEMUsic]

Some suggestions (since you asked):

The second half of the song seemed to lack a melody--it all seemed to be harmonic progression. I would personally try to work in some melodic variations (esp. since this seems to be a Theme and Variations form, for the most part). I would also maybe sneak in a B part with different chord progressions and melodies just to mix things up. BUT that's just what I would do. Feel free to do what you want. Like I said, I liked it. :D

[FitzMusic]

@flyingEMUsic thanks for the comment, your advice is really helpful.

[ayahh2296]

i realllyy lovveee itt

[stelisk1]

omg GREAT SONG YOU ARE GOOD KEEP TRYING !!!!

[FrenchToastAwsome]

@FitzMusic that would be awesome!

[waltzestotherescue]

This is very cool! I agree with flyingEMUsic that the second part wasn't as melodic, but you varied your patterns enough to maintain my interest. You could do something as simple as change the Dm9 (before E) to a major (or dominant) seventh/ninth for some variation. You did a really good job of drawing out the dominant seventh (E) to increase the tension. I loved when you brought the original theme back in at 2:15. Great composition, post more! : )