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I know the voices can sound a little robotic but sometimes they're not too bad so I thought I'd give this a shot.
**REAL SCENE WRITTEN BELOW**
"Renesmee, what do you want to do... with us?" I sighed; this day was just going to be ruined. I lay back down and frowned,
"Oh Jacob, not now please."
"No," Jacob persisted a little urgently, "I need to know."
"What do you want to know then? Question me till your heart's content." He gripped my hand tighter and rested his head by mine.
"Ok," he paused, thinking hard, "do you find me attractive?" I laughed out loud.
"Trust you to ask me something like that."
"Just answer, please." He didn't laugh or sound amused. I pursed my lips and then answered,
"Yes." I could practically hear his smile burst out onto his face.
"Right," he attempted to sound casual, "do you want me to be your boyfriend?" I frowned hard. "Oh, I don't like that expression." Jacob muttered.
"I'm sorry, its just; I've known you since I was born." I told him gently, refusing to open my eyes and see his face. "You were like a brother to me." I heard him sigh but continued. "When I was younger, I never thought of you that way."
"I didn't either."
"Good, I wouldn't like it very much if I knew you thought of me as your BOYfriend." I half-laughed.
"You know what I mean." Jacob groaned. "Carry on wounding my ego then." I slapped his arm gently.
"It hasn't even been that long since I thought of you like that."
"Only a year and a half to be exact." Jacob said, almost regrettably.
"See and you're already falling in love with me. I'm still so young! Its just because of my freaky DNA that I've grown fifteen years ahead."
"Will you ever...stop aging?" He asked warily.
"We're not sure really but I haven't made much progress recently. I'll think I'll stop when I'm around seventeen, eighteen, just like Edward and Bella." I shuddered. "To think of me getting stuck at thirty or something."
"Thirty's not old!" Jacob cried, amused. "I'm nearly there, physically."
"Jacob, that's different, you have dog in you." I told him. "Do you want an answer to your question?" There was an awkward pause and I knew Jacob had forgotten what hed asked me. "If I wanted you to be my boyfriend, idiot." I reminded him and he nodded.
"I know. I was just testing you." I smiled sarcastically at him and he gestured for me to continue. "So you think I'm more of a brother?" He mused. "I don't think a brother should kiss you like I did..."
"No, thats just gross Jacob." I cringed. "I don't think of you as a brother much anymore."
"Good, I don't want to be getting all incest on you." He teased then he paused. "So what do you think of me then?" Jacob's voice suddenly turned serious.
"Well," I started, "obviously I like you a little more than a brother or a friend." I sighed. "There are just so many complications."
"I'm not asking if it'll happen. I'm asking if you want it to happen." I opened my eyes at him and stared at his face.
"Fine." I snapped, suddenly self-conscious. "I would like it to happen." I felt defeated.
"Oh good-o." Jacob grinned smugly. "So why can't we just carry on like it then?"
"Because half of my family still has you on their death list, that's why." I reminded him and he winced.
"Oh yeah.."
"Jacob, this is an unlikely relationship. It's like a cat and a..."
"Dog?" Jacob laughed. I smiled quickly.
"I'm forcing immortal enemies together."
"No you're not."
"Jacob, don't you remember who I am?"
"You're Renesmee." He answered, dumbly. His grin was still occupying his face. I rolled my eyes and sighed deeply.
"I'm a vampire, Jacob. You are a werewolf." His grin vanished and he frowned deeply. "Edward still hates you. Rosalie," Jacob growled at her name, "despises you to the depths of Hell. Sam doesnt know I'm over here and if he did, he'd rip you to pieces. Im crossing the boundaries."
"You're half human, you're allowed to." Jacob whined.
"I'm a Cullen. You aren't."
"Gee, that took some detective work." Jacob growled and I frowned at him.
"I'm trying to make you see this from my perspective."
"Don't you want to see things from MY perspective?" He asked and I was caught short. "This loving you isn't the easiest thing in the world, Renesmee. You think the complications are all for you and they're not. Like you said, Sam will kill me for bringing you over here. Your family still arent entirely convinced that they shouldn't kill me and well, your father..." Jacob sighed, "it's not as if he'll happily give me a blessing." Another sigh escaped his lips depressingly. "I'm breaking all the rules and I'm not even enjoying it that much."
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it was so good except that leah died that was sad i started crying she never got her happy ending it`s very sad. and i wish you wrote into the funeral but it was still totally amazing and i loved it still
barnbums123 1 year ago
Im so upset, i wanted to read the rest but the link wouldn't work :(
MegaMovie99 2 years ago
I love this fanfiction soo much!! :) <3
Wolfgirlheartsjacob 2 years ago