Raise the Bar - Jonnavie

Raise the Bar Cypher. NO, I'm not a "real" MC. This was totally for fun! ;)

I was called out by Metaforce:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40v0MKoU8XE


Calling out Alanx Passauer:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p77muiY7peE
Check him out

Lyrics:
I'ma let ya finish, but I'm barging in like kanye
Cause right now I'm a diva like beyonce
I got a booty, but that doesn't mean I got no brain
Cause with my flow, I'ma make the fellas go insane
And ya probably think I can't intimidate
But I don't need the hate to get ya to appreciate
I'ma raise the bar, higher than our tax rates
It's almost no debate, what I create, is pretty great
And I don't need to be tall to be above ya'll
Cause when I'm done with this track you'll be the one to fall
I know I maybe small, and always pushed against a wall
But not this time, I'm the bully in this bathroom stall
But I don't even need the violence to keep on defying
and I don't need alliance, so don't even get to trying
Oh don't be crying, I'm just advisin
That you better check your rhymes before publicizing
Don't mean to diss but this miss can't dismiss
The fact you call yourself a lyricist and vocalist
Often I kinda miss, that's why I'm gna reminisce
The time that rhymes consist of words that only benefit
You can't articulate, that's why I'm hard to imitate
My style is versatile and something you cannot eliminate
Go ahead and mock me, it's something you'll regret
Cause in the long run,
You'll be paying me respect

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Raise the bar cypher
• Guam
• hip
• hop
• Guam poetry
• Metaforce
• Jonnavie

[ch3353xc4k3]

An attempt? Haha!

[nickatrop]

deece rhymes flow is nice but the delivery is kinda soft, even tho you're a lil girl you should still come a little harder, little more passion.

[ch3353xc4k3]

@nickatrop I'd like to reply to everyone who criticized my delivery in this video, but that's a hassle. So I'll just reply to you. I just wanna say thank you for the comment. I will definitely consider the advice for future endeavours. But just to clarify, I aint a rapper or anything like that though.

[itsKidFrankie]

her rhymes are fine her delivery is just awkward tho haha

[ch3353xc4k3]

@itsKidFrankie Buahaha, it is a bit awkward, huh? Thanks though!

[ch3353xc4k3]

"Get back in the kitchen" is a sexist comment that implies women are meant to do work for men, and that men are generally better than girls. If there is another meaning behind that comment, please let me know.

[ch3353xc4k3]

@TrueBrowny Ouch, man. Not once did I disrespect males in this cypher entry.

[yuungAB]

tight shit..

[nickatrop]

@ch3353xc4k3 lol if you're not a rapper what do you call this? ;)

[jayesone]

This girl is the Queen of my dream, oh my...

[kidblade11]

this go hard lol

[intrepid401]

Chick looks like Brenda Song... Not even joking.

[MrCeezy09]

lack of Swag, that's it!