nice direction. the opening shot was really cool and good job directing the actors. they seemed really natural and didn't sound stupid like most the other movies we watched. that probably has a lot to do with the writing. i like how you didn't try to make every line really witty. no one talks like that.
i would like to have the conflict introduced sooner. i never really knew where this movie was heading until the last 30 seconds.
Decent camera work and acting. I think you could have done a little more in the beginning to set up the conflict that he is unhappy with his current life.
This is Great!
What is the RTF program like at UT?
RSVGvideo 11 months ago
Loved the bit where the lights come on above his head in the hallway...nice. Was that deliberate or just a happy accident?
fiveiron40 3 years ago
nice direction. the opening shot was really cool and good job directing the actors. they seemed really natural and didn't sound stupid like most the other movies we watched. that probably has a lot to do with the writing. i like how you didn't try to make every line really witty. no one talks like that.
i would like to have the conflict introduced sooner. i never really knew where this movie was heading until the last 30 seconds.
kudos. make more movies.
-ARTinius
nicetauntauns 3 years ago
Decent camera work and acting. I think you could have done a little more in the beginning to set up the conflict that he is unhappy with his current life.
soren50 3 years ago