ATTITUDE

24 hour Christian film contest submission.

It had to be under three minutes long.
The security elements we used were:
Guitar,
Baseball,
and a 720 degree pan.

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[TomySky]

A good feel overall, but far too long. This reminds me of several ads that I've seen (e.g. Nike's "No Excuses"). Those are 1 min. Yours would have been great at that length.

The elements felt "tacked on" (like the 720 pan), as did the cuts to other stationary bits. Could have been the pacing that gave that impression.

Must say that I love the cut to silence with "lost everything" and the field. Awesome.

You're doing well. Keep practicing. -Luke

[1989Joel]

Thanks for you critique! I appreciate it.

I agree with your all your points...I made this for a 24 hr Christian video contest...so the 720

was a security element we used...this probably would have turned out better if it was not for the 24 hr thing.

[DYBI100]

Yeah!!!!!

[TomySky]

I hear ya. We made one too and felt the time crunch. I'm here to help! -Luke

[BreanneAlicia85]

Good job guys. Cool shots and filming. Keep it up!

[skidderman2]

Awsome job guys!

[singerhope]

This is my favorite! Good job! :D

[jjjost]

I'm really happy how this turned out. The only thing I wish we could re-do was the 720 pan

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[wilkinson4925]

I liked your music. I also like the one shot that looked like you dollied over to the left...very cool. The 720 pan was...interesting. Good luck!

[Composer17]

That was really cool, good script, editing and camera work!!

Awesome!