Polish Dance by Edmund Severn Violin

Polish Dance by Edmund Severn on Violin
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Music

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• polish
• dance
• violin
• violinmaster6
• edmund
• severn

[bombayman56]

spiccato is too choppy and some notes are uncertain. Ask yourself "are they flats, naturals or sharps". There is no such thing as a shnarp or flatural. The harmonics werent in the right spot, sounding quite affronting. Also, lift up your violin, or in the long term, you will do your back in (nastily!). Other than that, it was good. 6/10

[violinmaster6]

@bombayman56 thank you for the advice

[mde03]

good, but i would suggest you clean the bow lifts. they were like tumbling! you can slow down when you do legato, you know? to make it more dramatic. it's EXPRESSIVO! by slowing down and makeing it dramatic, your increasing your interpretation of the piece. sound long, and happy/ joyful (106=137). nice vibrato. fix out of tune notes. you have a lot to work on. still, good!

[Pvviolinist]

too loud on the parts meant to be slow and beautiful.

[MrViolinGuy]

you take the double stops d-c#-b on e string faster for some reason, and when you come down, your staccato is too bouncy. Play more into the string on those parts.

[yashnaidu8]

I'd keep working it so that you could pick up the tempo a bit (on the theme) and work on your clarity (as far as your bow lifts & left hand pitz), but other than that.. you have quite a bit of potential with this piece. Keep at it, just add a little bit of energy to it (and mind your posture!), remember, presentation is a huge medium in performance.

All in all, good work. Make sure to make your interpretation your own, you know? You're doing great though, keep it up.

[tchowmusic]

You should hold your violin higher...

[erikwallin1995]

In the end, just so you know, your supposed to keep the bow still, not move it over the strings.

[markjharper]

You are a very talented and dedicated player! Good job, both on your playing and your expressiveness through the music and over this electronic medium. Kee practicing and always improving!

mjh75 (you know who. . .)

[DebbieKSantiago]

wow!! u r amazing!! thank u for putting this up! im goin 2 play this piece =]