My Entinty-orginal rap/spoken word

my attempt at a sort of, free form rap
heavily inspired by none shall pass by aesop rock.
I know, my delivery sucks, but some of my rhymes are pretty tight, amiright?
updated, revised version in the future.
oh, and if I could get a beat, and some non-shitty recording stuff, the future is open

Lyrics:

Hand out streched gutter rain falling on your face
polluting your stolen mindset, killing the remainder of grace-
the dashboard Jesus, he can't find a reason for this strange stranger taking his place.
Little by little, falling ontop of a big necked douchebag who actaully times the drop.
Spit and spittle fly like rusted needles in a room you are eager to forget rhymes and a riddle
For my shits and giggles, kid-
put up your hands, stan, get the hell out of the nile
you cold blooded, barechested, flatfooted crocidile

Like a souviner from a war damaged prison
hands outstreched, the only thing missing is blood and a cross
your a disposable mission, only working to make that dirty commision-
and everyone keeps saying that none shall pass-
drop down, drop a line, I got your mind on mine
you soviet, cold hearted jesus
cancer to your brain like what?
I'm I'm saying is that I don't think anyone will pass

Strange slitting throats without emotion like rebel arts and crafts
still, everyones saying
NONE SHALL PASS

I'm tying to help...you.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• none
• shall
• pass
• original
• rap
• white
• kid
• jesus
• soviet