YouTube Poop - Rock TV Gives You a Headache (Part 1)

part 1 of 2.

Mario and Luigi buy a rock TV. Meanwhile an alien explodes. Then Big Mouth says the f word to Oogtar. And Yoshi falls in love. But it's not over yet.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BqprW_aCoOs

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• rock
• tv
• gives
• you
• headache
• part1

[keytoaheart]

This is my honest opinion.

It's average for a beginner. Some ideas you had (like showing pictures with no sound and occasionally the scrolling text) can be really boring. If you can't find a source to go with your idea and have to resort to that, I suggest dumping the idea.

But some of it was pretty funny too. Some of the repetition things were pretty good, but you might want to make them shorter.

I'm sorry I sound so rough, but at least you can learn and become better from criticism, right?

[MyNameisB4U]

Yeah. I agree. I might make an edited version soon.

[keytoaheart]

Ok. Good luck, and sorry about sounding rough I was having a bad day lol.

[c3section]

lol

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