Fetures animation and poetry, made with young people and the poet Kevin cadwallender. The idea, they go out and about with their machine changing the everyday into poetry using their machine.
The concept is interesting. There are many nice camera shots. But others looked amature. You did better at framing your shots on this one. But editing and some shots need to be cleaned up. Watch the timing of your cuts and shots you choose. Editing, music and properly composed shots make or break a video/film.
Got a big kick out of this one too!
thePuzzledDragon 2 years ago
The concept is interesting. There are many nice camera shots. But others looked amature. You did better at framing your shots on this one. But editing and some shots need to be cleaned up. Watch the timing of your cuts and shots you choose. Editing, music and properly composed shots make or break a video/film.
BergVisionStudios 5 years ago