One More Day - Original Song by Doug B

I wrote this song to prove to myself that I could do more than love songs. I wanted to write a song that got me moving and was uplifting and I came up with this.

I'm using brand new equipment for this recording so I hope it sounds good to you all!

Enjoy, Comment, Rate, Subscribe!

Thank you all!

Category:

Music

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• Doug
• One
• More
• Day
• Original
• Song
• Accoustic
• Guitar

[Creamella]

hey Doug, you sound great and so does your new equipment. :)

but i wanted to go just a step further and give you a little constructive criticism, take it any way you like. the riff is very repetitive (but its a neat riff, don't get me wrong). even if you don't wish to use the more conventional verse/chorus(bridge) method of song-writing... perhaps you could switch it up a little and break from the annoyingly repetitive (neat) riff once in a while? :) good work.

[hotbot86]

@Creamella I don't mind constructive criticism at all! I agree that the chords are repetitive and would've benefited from some variety. I actually did use the traditional verse/chorus/bridge method for this song, but that probably gets a little lost because of the repetition.

The main goal of this song for me was really just an exercise in writing a song in a genre outside of my comfort zone. I was trying to write with an up-beat hopeful music style. To write a song that would make me smile.

[777hectorable]

i really like your style. i'd like to hear you do a sublime cover.

[hotbot86]

Thanks for the comment. I love sublime, I may have to put up a sublime some some time.

[bobb12381]

hi what guitar is that and r u going to be singing any more johnny cash songs good singing n guitar playin

[hotbot86]

I'm using an epiphone les paul that I've replaced the electronics in with Seymour Duncan pickups. And yes I will probably post some more Cash before too long. Thanks for the comments!

[thecolemantv]

you should make us be able to download this its amazing

[QuotidianHegemony]

I like it man. Congratulations, you earned a comment from the great QuotidianHegemony.

[theamazingsupergirl]

love that rhythm!

[mommaLaughing]

oh yeah, i love your sound!

[se7en1976]

About as decent as any act you'd find in a pub.

[paulmccarthy1989]

smile a bit when your singin :) wikid song