Space Database Movie

For a University project we were given 45mins of footage about space and stuff that we were told was a database, and were asked to edit the footage to make a "database movie" of between 5 and 10 mins.
Complete load of .... but this is what we came up with.
Music featured is "God Moving Over the Face of the Water" by Moby from the album "Moby".
Project Manager - Matt Gardiner
Video Editing - Chris Garner, Kane Andrews
Audio Editing - Andi Hosgood

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• database
• movie
• space

[DrAlbino]

this is good but you just need a bit more editing to hit the "Sweet Spot"

[ahosgood]

Can you suggest anything in particular?

[meyjior]

This isn't New Dawn Fades but God Moving Over The Face Of The Water ^^

[ahosgood]

Thank you for correcting me. I got it from Chris' PC and that is what it was called, so I didn't question it.

[fericire7]

awesome

[DrAlbino]

....im rambling now arn't i? ......plese dont take this the wrong way you've made an excellent film and the only reason im saying these things its because it has such potential..if it didnt i wouldnt be here writing this...time is money :)

if you like to hear a bit more rambling please, ill be happy to reply...i got some more in me :P.

[DrAlbino]

Plus the starting speeches where the guy tells you here lived tom jones and his son terry....perhaps if you could find something for the starting that makes an impact a real impact , your starting was excellent with the shot of the rocket and the moon lander landing but perhaps my tom jhones and his cottage arnt as important to a normal guy after hes seen these 2 things

[DrAlbino]

Also if you could focus more, like focus on a single thing...cause i think a few things are just flying around which allows our (the viewers) mind to wander...good trailers keep your attention deadfocued on whats going on...

plus i think your music is just too out their and the rest of the video take a backseat because of it...you focus more on the muisc instead of the significance of the events or the events themselves.

[DrAlbino]

but the Speeches in the start , they dont make an impact on you , there volume is bit low if you could add an effect to make it more promient... make it stick out more from the music.

[DrAlbino]

Ok, Im telling you this from the view point of an average bloke, so you might have to add things beause i'm not a specialist (not even an amature :P)