The Second Draft - A Short Film

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Uploaded by on Sep 29, 2009

What if your story was written?

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  • II liked most of it. I just didn't care for the end. when the character, Craig shows up with a gun in the 3rd draft. It was a little sudden and weak. There was just something missing. I cant put a finger on it, but it bugged me. Other wise it was great. I loved the plot The characters talking about them selves as characters in their story. I love it.

  • Like I said last time, it ROCKS. Seriously.

    Script is AWESOME, Editing was GREAT, and overall, it gets a 9/10 haha.

    REALLY good though. Man, that encourages me!

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