II liked most of it. I just didn't care for the end. when the character, Craig shows up with a gun in the 3rd draft. It was a little sudden and weak. There was just something missing. I cant put a finger on it, but it bugged me. Other wise it was great. I loved the plot The characters talking about them selves as characters in their story. I love it.
II liked most of it. I just didn't care for the end. when the character, Craig shows up with a gun in the 3rd draft. It was a little sudden and weak. There was just something missing. I cant put a finger on it, but it bugged me. Other wise it was great. I loved the plot The characters talking about them selves as characters in their story. I love it.
aviatormxpilot 2 years ago
Like I said last time, it ROCKS. Seriously.
Script is AWESOME, Editing was GREAT, and overall, it gets a 9/10 haha.
REALLY good though. Man, that encourages me!
popchris3 2 years ago 2